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The aggregate of features and traits that form the
individual nature of some person or thing.

In this tutorial I will guide you through a way to 'flesh out' an Original Character (Also known as an OC). Before we begin, let's go through the basics.

A character is quite simply one who possesses qualities that define them from someone else. Every character is original and unique. A character can not only be human, but an animal, an alien, or anything that the imagination can come up with.

However, characters are often difficult to create, because to put it bluntly, you are in a sense creating a new being. This being needs the same kinds of traits and characteristics you possess, but can't be your own. They have to be original. In this case, many young writers and artists forget how hard it is to make a character and forget the complex details that enhance a character.

Fleshing out is a term used commonly in developing characters. It means to add additional details and to really, make fatter. You're making this character fatter by adding more details, and that's exactly what we want. A fat, plump and juicy, fleshed out character.

Now let us begin.


A character cannot be made without at least purpose or inspiration. These two are the keys to getting anywhere with your character. Generally when you are creating a character you already have your setting and story somewhat created. However, in times when you have created your character before your plot, you still need to make choices.
The first choice is whether they are a PROTAGONIST or an ANTAGONIST. A protagonist is generally 'the good guy', or in other words, the main character. An antagonist is generally the villain.
Note: A villain, can also be portrayed as the good guy. In some films and books, the law are the antagonists and the criminal is the main character. This can be very effective.
The purpose of a character will be your main drive in fleshing them out. It shapes the events they've gone through and how it has developed them into the character they are now, or the character they will be later.
Adding to this, you have to remember that the key is to be flexible. When you have decided on something, you have to know that you might change this later, in case something is not compatible with the character, or if they have aged, etcetera.
Most have been lead to believe that a name is one of the first steps to creating a character, but that is not the case. Personally, a name is one of the last things I think of. However, it is possible to give them a 'temporary name' for now so it is easier to refer to your character, but note that it can be any name and will be changed when you have established their character more.


A past is always needed for a character. In literature, we call them 'back stories'. Even if you are not a writer, I highly recommend writing one once you have established your character's past. A past shapes out a character and how they act at the present moment.
First, consider their family. Did the character have brothers or sisters? Did the character have both parents? Were these parents married; divorced; single mother; did the mother have an affair; the list goes on. When choosing this, I base it around my friends' lives. There are endless possibilities to how their family is and the easiest way is to be realistic.
Every choice you make here will affect the character. Was this character's family rich, poor, middle-class, or what? Did the family live in a house, a unit, on the streets, a van. Were they nomads (never live in one area; always move around)?
If the character had all brothers, and the character was a girl, then did the character act like a tom-boy, following her brothers' example? Or did she keep her fairly girlish traits?
Note: every character has a past. Who cares if they can't remember it, they simply must. Even if you begin a character from birth, they still have a past; you would be creating their past then if the character is a child.
Pasts are fascinating, and like the character, are unique. Keep in mind here we are still only on the family itself. This family could have particular traits as well. Are they religious? Do they eat at the table, or in front of the TV? Are the parents overweight/obese, or health freaks? Clean house or messy? Book-lovers or internet-addicts? Do they have jobs? If so, what and how does the job affect their family? Do they work at home or go out to work?
These are just some of the possibilities you can come up with, but this is just the tip of the iceberg.
After you have established the character's basic family life, see if there were any major dramas that changed them. In their childhood lives, did they have a small story of their own such as being taken away from their family; orphaned; someone died in their family. Of course, it doesn't have to be a sob story.


To determine the character's nationality or heritage, you must know his/her parent's nationality. Are the parents European (classify what country), American (again, classify) or Asian? Are they immigrants, asylum seekers or runaways? Do they live in a developed country (Britain, USA, Australia, etcetera) or a developing country (countries suffering from poverty)? Everything will again, affect the character. In particular countries, there are also customs, cultures and beliefs that add onto that. For example, many middle-eastern countries are Muslim, so it is not easy to say that you have a character who lives in, let's say, Dubai but is Buddhist. It really doesn't work. Although there may be Buddhists in Dubai, it will sound very strange, and the audience who is hearing about your character will be turned off by this because they will assume that you have not done any research.
The character's origins will not only define their lifestyle, but also their appearance. Typically, those of Asian descent have slanted eyes. As a generalisation, a Chinese person has a rounder face than that of a Japanese person; although this is not always true, it can be used as a basis for their appearance, but I will explain appearances in more detail later.
If you are a perfectionist, then I would recommend researching genetics a little, so you can understand the dominant and recessive genes. Just wiki it, they're pretty easy to understand once you get the gist of it.
Lastly, the nationality will also describe the character's dialect, which brings me to the next topic.


This is one of the most important factors in a character as it represents how they interact with other people, can give a brief hint to their past and describes their social class. Dialect is how one speaks, defined by social class, regional speech patterns and other factors. It is not to be confused with accent, which is only used with how they speak, rather than the whole lot such as vocabulary, grammar, etcetera.
What accent does your character have? Once again, their parents and those who live around them will define their dialect. Those with a stilted voice will sound posh and those around them will then be lead to believe that they are from a high class. Someone from a poor background will not always pronounce their words clearly and cut off their consonants.
Stereotypes are again a good basis to use for dialects. Those who live in Birmingham (a city in England) have been stereotyped as having 'dumb-sounding voices', that is, they sound stupid. Although this is not true, you can use this accent for a character that comes off as dumb, as long as they grew up in this city, or their parents were from there.
The dialect also changes depending on the time period. If your character is set in the Renaissance period, then they will have an 'Old English accent'. This accent is generally stylised as posh with the archaic 'doth, art, thou' kind of deal, although this is false. Yes, the people in that time used words like art and thou, but they didn't sound that stilted. It was simply another accent that in this modern day, would sound strange because of the wording. The dialect could be very lazy and poorly spoken, but the words stayed the same.
However, choosing an archaic dialect like this is very difficult. In writing, it would be more suitable to modernise it by making it stilted, but natural. This is hard to do and takes lots of practice. This is like translating the dialogue.
For example, the book 'The Boy in the Striped Pyjamas' had Germans as the characters, but the book was written in English. The characters spoke German but obviously the writer would not write in German at the dialogue, otherwise only those who could read German would understand. The same applies to the Old English accent.
This point of information relates to linguistics. During the last century accents have been mixed in with other accents because of immigration and multiculturalism. This changes how people speak again so in this modern day, a 'true accent' is very rare because people have mixed in with other cultures.
The last tip is slang. I highly recommend researching the typical slang if your character is from a different era, or a particular subculture that you are not familiar with. It sounds very wrong when they say slang but it's in the wrong era.
Just for kicks, the two swear words f*ck and c*nt began being used in the late 1700s. Although, in Shakespeare's time a similar word was used called 'fuckkit', I believe, which can be found in one of Shakespeare's plays. He probably made the word up, no doubt.


The personality is the most complex part to a character. Because of this, I am cutting it down so the personality isn't so long.
First, when establishing a personality you be very broad. Get a piece of blank paper and start writing down any words you want that you have in mind for a personality. For now, we keep it broad. Keep the words to a minimum, such as 'nice, kind, caring, etcetera.' Once you have done this, circle the words that you think fit the character best. This is the basis for your character's personality.
A personality is never one thing. Personalities generally have opposites in them: what you see on the outside, and what you see on the inside. These two sides are generally opposite, and what makes a character 'complex'. Before you can do this, we need to not only get their traits right, but their emotions, ticks and psychological traits.
Make a list of scenarios and write out how you think your character would react in said scenario. For example:
• Meeting someone at the local pub
• Sees a car accident
• At a funeral
• At a wedding
These are just a few examples. You can create as many as you want. Don't be worried if you can't write or not, because it's not about your ability to write, it's your attempt to understand your character more.
Let's look at the other aspects of the personality.


A character is filled with fat juicy emotions. Does this character let out their emotions or do they hide their true emotions away? It is always important to choose if your character is a liar or not a liar. In this, I mean, do they say what they really mean? In a very simple sense, if a character says he's fine, but he's/she's really not, then they are a liar. In this case, they keep their emotions bottled up inside.
A character can be emotionally fragile. Is there something that makes this character cry? Did they lose someone they once loved? How do they let out these emotions? Crying; talking; or do they not let them out at all? Because they don't let out these emotions, does it affect them in a good or bad way?
For another exercise, write down the main emotions:
• Happy
• Sad
• Angry
• Confused
There are many more than that, but write them all down, then write a page or so on how your character uses these emotions. Think why they would be doing this. Are they a happy person? Are they a sad person? Why? If you cannot answer why then there is no reason for them to be this. You must always answer the why question before you decide on a character's personality, or anything for that matter, relating to character development.


I made this term up. On the news, you may notice psychologists talking about their new research. For example: A child who grows up in an unstable environment is more likely to become a criminal.
This may seem very obvious, but honestly, listen to those psychologists. If you don't, you will never understand how people work. First, realise that they always say mostly or more likely. It is not always the case. So a psychological trait is something they do due to past experiences. These include stealing, drinking and smoking.
In psychology, an alcoholic is an alcoholic because he/she has had a terrible life and drinks to numb the pain. The alcoholic has no other choices. Alcoholics sometimes do drugs, which is another psychological trait.
You cannot give a character a psychological trait unless you have a reason for doing so. Borrow a book from the library on psychology or simply look it up on the net; you will find answers.


So you have established their emotions, personality base and their psychological traits. A complex character is not simply made, but is the art of adding everything together to understand who they are perfectly and completely. I found that the best thing about characters is that they can never be perfect, which is what makes someone real.
A good tip is to grab traits from people you know. The audience loves seeing traits they can relate to, because it will make them feel more involved in the artwork/story. Connections with the audience are necessary. However, that does not mean you write/draw for the audience. Remember, you are doing this for you, not anyone else. If you are doing this for someone else then the creation is no longer yours.


Any ticks this character has? Nose-picker? Folds their napkins? Cracks their knuckles? Tiny little details are everything. In film especially, there is so much detail gone into the smallest of things. These tiny details, however, are generally ignored by the audience because they simply don't notice them, but subconsciously, they do. It makes the scene and character so juicy when these tiny little details are added. Without these details suddenly everything becomes bland and tasteless.
Ticks are quite easy to get, if you are out of ideas. Just think of your friends and family. I, for one, have a friend that has an annoying habit of smacking her lips when she eats. It's a habit and she can't help that. And myself, well, I bite my nails. Tiny little things, but they make us so incredibly individual.


Great, now that we have established who your character is and how they act, we can finally get onto their lives with other people. Typically, a character has relationships with: friends, enemies, family, best friends, acquaintances, people they dislike, and their lover/sexual partner.
I would assume by now that you have most of these characters already down pat. That would be nice, otherwise me explaining this area is a lack of time, since you have to go and create at least twenty other characters for this to happen.
Now, as mentioned before, the character must have a family, whether the family is dead or not. Does your character have a strained relationship with their family, or maybe only one member? Rivals with cousins or siblings? Does the family hate the character? These all need the big WHY question added on to it, so if you can't answer this question, you need to revise a few things.
Every character has an enemy. How boring would it be if you had a character but no one hated him? That is what makes a story tasteless, because that would mean there would be no conflict.
At the same time, the character needs a biffle. Or do they? No, they don't! They could be a social introvert, but again, ask yourself the big WHY question first before you make this decision.
Do the same for each other category, until you get to lover/sexual partner.
I find this one of the most important categories for a character. Does this character have a lover? Are they a player? Are they a virgin? Question upon question, these define your character greatly. Those that are still a virgin at the age of thirty are generally very sad and depressed, basically because they can't get any. If they are a virgin, then maybe they are asexual. Discuss the sexuality. And remember WHY! Basically, any character over the age of eighteen has a love life, at least. Although some people may get very awkward about it, there is nothing to be ashamed of. You must care for your character's well being! If you neglect this area then they probably will fap every night, and it will be your fault.
A character also has people that he/she hates, or other characters hate him/her. Although you as the creator don't want anyone to hate your character, the sad truth is that there will always be someone. So make this fictionally true! Add a few characters that hate your character to spice it up a little. It is very effective and the emotions that spill out of your character because of this are great, because it spices them up even more.
Although note, that does not mean to make everyone hate him/her. Limit it.


To help with relationships, make your character interact with them! Write many vignettes and short stories to help with this. Again, it doesn't matter if you aren't a good writer; it is so you understand how they work.
Is the character bitter to other characters, or only to some, and sweet to those they like? They will never act the same to each character. When you are writing these interactions, you will also get the feel of their dialect as well.
Role-playing is not always the best thing for character development. Although it is fun to play out your character with somebody else, I have found that RPs can make a character act Out Of Character (OOC). Adding to that, RPs can give your character too much unwanted information. Suddenly there are traits and emotions that the character never had but now suddenly do for no apparent reason, and suddenly they are banging everyone they see and are totally gorgeous. Well, it doesn't work like that.
RP with a fully developed character, not a developing one.


You have finally got their inner workings, and now we have to get their outside done! I believe that it is not a good idea to start a character off with an appearance. By the time you have established a personality, an appearance is quite easy to get, because the character itself will you help you shape their looks.
Most people think of appearances very narrowly: eye colour, hair, fat/skinny, skin colour. You need a lot more information than that for a developed character. Of course, it is nice to begin with these things, but you have to extrapolate.
Hair, firstly, is a lot more complex than you would think. For a man, does he have short hair, scruffy, shoulder-length, long…? The colour of his hair? Dyed? Fringe or no fringe? If your character is set in a different era, then note that fringes did not exist until the late 1800s, as I can remember. Long hair on men did not come in until the 60s, so making a man with long hair in the 1800s, for example, it will not work. Just don't do it.
Refer back to the looks of the character's parents. The easiest way is to use a few characteristics from each parent and mix it to make the appearance of your character.
What is more important to look at is the structure of their body. Broadly, decide whether they are tall, average or short. Then decide if they are stocky, skinny, obese, chubby, bony, muscly or average. The first instinct is to make a character skinny because it 'looks better'. Don't be afraid to give your character something that may make them look 'ugly!' In what we call 'real life', there are basically only 1% of people that are actually naturally beautiful/handsome. If you make a character gorgeous, then it will make them bland because they have no flaws.
Flaws are everything in a character. Flaws are great. They make the character so lovingly imperfect and imperfection is what you want.
Flaws can include: pasty skin; crooked/large nose; squinty eyes; scars; freckles; chubbiness; crooked/yellow teeth; big ears; greasy/dirty hair. These are a few examples that you can use. It sounds bad to call something like these 'flaws' but in terms of the perfect model, these are what they don't have.
A face can have different structures as well. Round-faced people generally look 'cute' or 'innocent', with puppy-fat and dimples. This is not always so, as it is only a generalisation, but round-faces are usually like this. For a cute kind of character, or a young teenager, a round-face would be more suitable.
Men with high cheek bones generally have a gaunt face with a hard jaw bone. It gives them the rugged but formal look; works better with tall pale men.
In some animated films, designers make the character's appearance relate to their personality or jobs. For example, in Tim Burton's Corpse Bride, the bellman who tells the news has a body shape of a bell. In most Disney movies, thugs are large, stocky and generally have some kind of feature that is grotesque.
These are a few ways to help develop the appearance for your character.
Also note, if your character has a scar, then know why and how it got there. Your character may also have piercings or tattoos, but make sure you know hey they got there.
Some things also affect your character's appearance. Lack of sleep will give them sunken eyes. Drinking, smoking and other bad habits can also affect the character's appearance: this is generally negative, that is, makes them look less 'perfect'.
You might have noticed that I have described appearances as a human. Anthropomorphic characters apply to this as well, and other creatures that are not human, such as demons and Gods.
For a last tip, note the age of your character. If they are a teenager, then they will have softer features and depending if they are a young teenager or an old teenager, you have to take in account puberty. Zits are one example of this, and don't cringe at this because it is completely natural. A young boy will also not be six foot, he will probably be five foot. Girls at a young age are very straight and have no curves in their body.
Older characters (35+) may have aging lines or greying hair. This depends on how healthy they are, though. Someone can still look young if they are forty, but if your character is the type that gets wasted every Saturday night or smokes, then they will age quicker.


Clothes represent characters for their tastes and preferences. In most cases, an author or artist will create one or two main outfits and the character will wear the same clothes in every drawing/story. This is perfectly fine because it is very difficult to plan an outfit for every day, but to help expand their wardrobe, begin with categories.
Just like in the game, The Sims (a virtual life-simulation game), you get to create a few different outfits, and these are:
• Everyday
• Formal
• Pyjamas
• Underwear
• Swimwear
• Athletic
Of course, I personally, don't think it is quite necessary to plan your character's underwear, the rest of these are quite appropriate. The first category, 'everyday', is the one you should begin on. Knowing a character's personality, it can be quite easy to plan.
Firstly, think of their age. A teenager obviously isn't going to wear a corset + fishnet stockings, unless she's an underage and illegal hooker (if she is, then remember your reason why she is!). The same applies to an elder, as they probably will wear what the young generation would call 'daggy'.
Establish whether your character is trendy or not. If you already know what their job is, you can probably create a design that reflects their work. For example, a lawyer or one who works in law may wear lots of suits.
Sub-cultures are a great basis for clothing as well. Indie, hipster, Goth, lad, etcetera. Of course, be careful if your character is too much like a sub-culture because some people can quite annoyed with this as they may hate the sub-culture, and of course, you'll need to choose why they are based on that sub-culture.
Also note the time period. When I was writing a back story for one of my own characters, the time period was the late 1700s. Through research, I found that the women's dress changed considerably in the 1750s compared to the 1780s. In one decade, the skirt of the dress was low waisted but had a huge frame, and in the other, the skirt was high wasted and made the wearer look very lean and thin. I also learnt just how uncomfortable those dresses were, with the amount of layers they had.
If your character is set in the Renaissance period, and he is male, well, even if men in tights looks awful, you are just going to have to deal with that because that was the style. Apparently men looked good in tights at one point with their junk jiggling about everywhere, just like David Bowie in The Labyrinth.
The other categories are much easier to choose. Formal wear? Basically some sort of suit for men and a dress for women. The last two categories, athletic and swimwear, are optional because the character of yours may not even be a swimmer/athlete.
Once you have got their main 'look', add accessories and other minor details. Jewellery? A type of shoe? And yes, probably the first instinct is to use Converse as the shoe type for a character, and it's okay. No one judges you. Everyone loves Converse. So do I, and I have learnt from my mistakes that not everyone in the world will wear black or green high tops.


Bi-polar; dyslexic; schizophrenic; anorexic; bulimic; depressed; the list goes on. There a number of mental disorders that a character may have, but this is risky business. Especially when a character has anorexia/bulimia, people will probably instantly hate your character because they suddenly believe they are a pathetic and whiny bitch.
This is because mental disorders have been warped by the common teenager, especially depression. A lot of teenagers believe they have a mental disorder when really they are just confused.
If you are to make a character with a mental disorder (know WHY though!) then research it thoroughly! Know all the signs and know exactly how the character would act with the disorder. How does it affect their everyday life? Do they try to hide it? Are they seeing a shrink?
Be careful.


First let's discuss 'powers' or 'abilities' as it is shorter. First, establish whether their power is good, bad, or neutral. Does it help them in any way? Do they have a type of power that could potentially kill hundreds of people? Does this power of theirs make the mad with power?
After you have got this, establish HOW they got their power/ability. Were they born with it? Were they infected? For example, bitten by a supernatural being (or a radioactive spider). Or did they have the power the whole time and they didn't know until they were taught how to control it?
The best tip for a character with powers is to not make them invincible. If you give them too many things, or something too strong, then it makes the character lack any kind of vulnerability and that could lead to something disastrous, such as a Mary Sue or a Gary Stu. We don't want that.
And of course, research! Have there been any recent scientific studies on the power you have chosen? I do know that as far as teleportation goes, they have transported a micron, but they're still working on that.
Of course, powers aren't real, but is always good to get a scientific view on these things.
In terms of the supernatural, well, I have only one thing to say:
Understand first the ORIGINS of supernatural beings before you make your OC one! A vampire was originally a type of demon, and they were actually quite a disgusting-looking creature. Wiccan culture was very big on vampires.
'Glamour' came later, much later.
Demons and devils are a huge topic, and because of this I actually bought a book called 'The Complete Book of Devils and Demons', by Leonard R.N. Ashley (for those who are interested) that has really helped how I write a supernatural character. Your own knowledge is not enough to get by the whole topic, and ever since Stephanie Meyer brought in her faux-vampires, supernatural beings such as vampires, werewolves and demons are becoming harder to be appreciated because they are either instantly hated by those that detest the vampiric fad, or loved by those that do. In my opinion, stick to the true demons. And anyway, they are way more fun.
Religion also branches off from supernatural beings, as most religions basically created this. Heck, where do you think the Devil came from? Be very careful when specifically mentioning a type of religion though because some people may get offended because they will believe that their beliefs are right, not the other.
I find it safer to base supernatural creates off mythology, and you don't have to limit yourself! Greek, Norse, Chinese, Japanese, European, African, the list goes on, and the best part is, is that the topic is actually interesting to study.
Some people love bringing in angels, but I would suggest try not saying, 'the angels came from Heaven, where God lives', etcetera, as again, people may get offended.


In some fandoms, there is a type of universe that has been created. For example, in Doctor Who you have the 'Whoniverse', and in Buffy the Vampire Slayer, you have the 'Whedonverse' (Joss Whedon wrote the series). The character lives in a universe, right? Establish whether they live on Earth; in a parallel universe; a kind of Underworld; or in a fantasy universe. This can be quite tricky as when creating a new universe, you have to consider not just the looks and geography, but the people, the social classes, the political system, the currency, their advances in science, their education, their countries, their fashion, everything! You have to, in a sense, create another world! This is quite a huge task and no one could possibly think of every little detail, but you have to try!
Remember, research, research, research. I cannot emphasise this enough!
In your universe, also take note of the era. I have mentioned the era in various topics that it does very much make an impact on your character. Again, research.


Oh yes, this makes everyone jump and down in excitement. That, or cringe away in disgust. But do not fear! I find that this topic is one of the most important of them all! Really, even writing a scene about a character having sex actually brings out more of their character because you understand how they work, and a few of their preferences. Are they into oral? Biter or a sucker? Got a secret fetish? Sweet spots? A kind of preference? How do they 'like' it? As awkward as it might sound, it helps the creator understand their character.
Obviously, if your character is very young, then please don't consider this. Ditto, if they are very old.
What turns your character on? What turns them off? This actually helps if you want to know what your character thinks of other people. They may see someone with straight blonde hair and be, 'URGH! I HATE PEOPLE WITH STRAIGHT BLONDE HAIR!'
Get a notebook and write these down. Also consider what they see in a girl/boy (depending on their sexuality).


Get a notebook and write up as many 'black or white' questions as possible. Here are a few to start you off:
• Cat/dog
• Pepsi/coke
• Chocolate/vanilla
• Beer/wine
• Coffee/tea
• Rock/R&B
These are helpful for character traits. It's great to know what your character prefers. Make a hundred of these. I'm sure you can find these on any OC Meme.
Also consider their favourites, such as:
• TV show
• Music
• Car
• Film
• Genre
• Shirt
• Food
• Drink
Just a few things, but try and answer as many as you can because they give you a good insight of your character.


I am fascinated by characters because you have to strive to make a character imperfect, not perfect. It's what makes them so beautiful and wonderful. Without imperfection, a character would be bland. Yes, he/she may be loved, smart, good-looking, the perfect hero, but what does that do? Nothing. It makes them unbelievable and flawless, which is not a character. A character has flaws. Flaws are A+, okay?
If I haven't said this before, then I will say it again. Base your characters flaws on people you know. Don't make them the same, but tiny little details you notice in your friends or family will work in your character, and it makes them juicy and fleshed out which is what you want. A plump, juicy, fleshed out character.
Always ask yourself when making something for your character, 'would this happen in real-life?' If your character lives in a fantasy world though, just make it reasonable. Think of what the media in your universe would think!
Is your character more than just imperfect? Are they immoral? Dangerous, perhaps? Why are they? Consider all of these things and soon you will have the perfect, imperfect character that is juicy and fleshed out.


I hope I have helped with fleshing out a character! Here are a few tips for the end:
• Have a notebook dedicated to your ideas on not only characters, but the plot line for your story or plot. I have a preference for A5 spiral notebooks.
• Research!
• Even though I have mentioned what the audience will think of your work, you must remember that you are doing this for you, and because you want to. This however does not mean you can do whatever you want.
• Don't add so many things that the character suddenly becomes unrefined. Keep your character refined and don't add too many traits that they start crossing over.
• Always remember the wonderful WHY question.
• Write lots of vignettes and short stories to help flesh out your character! Try this, even if you are not a very good writer.
• Try and draw a reference sheet that has the character's common expressions, and their everyday wear. Try this, even if you are not a very good drawer.
• Your character is a living being. Care for them and don't let them drift away.
• Your character probably will end up doing things you don't plan them to do when you have fleshed them out. They have their own individual thoughts and feelings!

This took roughly... ten hours XD
12 pages of nothing but pure character development!
I started this on Sunday.... but procrastination, RPing, Tumblr, Pottermore... I have a life, you know!
That, and I have three tests this week, two of which, had been completed, and both of which, I have received 100%
now just my history essay which I'm also confident on.

I'm quite proud of this, but because I am so anxious to post it I haven't proof-read it yet ^^; If there are grammar/punctuation mistakes please tell me! Or bad syntax XD

I would recommend using this as a reference when you're shaping your character and just you know, seeing what you should look at in terms of 'this topic', if you get what I mean ^^;

Please note that this is 100% based on my own knowledge. I'm a self-taught writer who has only learnt by the mistakes I've made and I have no idea how anyone else creates their characters. This is just what I consider when I'm making mine.

Feedback is welcome and I hope I've helped people!!

EDIT: Yes, I am rewriting the SUPERNATURAL topic as I didn't write it clearly enough on what I was trying to get at. Yes, I am fixing up the few history mistakes etc etc. And yes, I am a believer that writers can write things that they have not actually experienced. Heck, I'm 15. I have to write things that I haven't experienced. It's called imagination, yo.
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Wow, very nice - I've figured most of this out via my own personal experiences and reading, but even so I managed to find details I never thought of - the black and white (polar) questions, sexual preference (what turns them on), Past/back story...

I guess I have to admit most new series I start lack a current back story, as if it wasn't important, and I'm still not sure, am I wrong here? should I add in something? or is it okay if you make it clear their past before a certain point isn't really relevant - such as a fairly normal life, until a certain event happens (a suicide attempt, getting their hands on a map, ect ect) - I know in certain stories a past is a must (ie not in this time era, or in an era like it, a past that the reader can't relate with when the writer says "a normal life") and to a larger extent, what about the past of the world as a whole? wouldn't this often effect the character in their own way? (basically including a past of the universe they are in - maybe even having to do this if a past to the character is boring or irrelevant)

As for sexual preference, this doesn't always have to be pointed out directly or even relate to sex, maybe you should reconsider this as more of a "loving" preference (and sex being an aspect of it), maybe a certain type of character turns them on - maybe a certain character. its their ways of revealing sexual preference without being obvious about it? without writing a romance novel? It's simply not always appropriate to always include sex (at least directly) especially if the novel isn't about romance (which i feel this section of your guide seems to be concentrating on.. what about the other two dozen + genres?). You can show just as much of a loving presence when a young girl waves her brave warrior away as he valiantly goes to battle, sword and shield, with a mammoth - maybe he smiles at her - maybe that's a turn on for the guy (or the girl) but it certainly has no direct notation they'll end up in bed.

I think it's funny that you mention to never create the appearance first.. - I never have, but never thought twice about doing it. For me it's always been about inventing the characters purpose, back story, and personality at the very start - hell once I experimented with never describing a characters actual appearance (1st person story from a blind character in a world that makes no apparent sense) but this is true and I totally agree with what you are saying, create the characters appearance later because their traits will basically do that for you. Examples, a person who may be rude might have a crinkled nose or always have something stuck in their teeth, someone easily annoyed may have wrinkles on their forehead for scowling, someone who is nit-picky always has newish matching clothing, a slob may be someone who doesn't care if their jeans have holes in them and are worn.

-A good example of one of my characters she's abnormally pale/burns easily, so she always wears dark clothing that covers her entire body, even during hot days. She's rebellious - so she has streaks of red in her hair. She's secretive so she always wears more than one layer of clothing... ect, point is I think personality traits are by far the most important of a character and one trait often leads to another (a tease = always very close, face to face when talking to men, obsessed with death = always using the same revolver/chamber to kill, depressed = taking unnecessary/dangerous risks without care for her own body ) --even though you cut back on personality i think it deserves a bigger chunk-- personality is what makes a character go round.

I really like your bit on habits/ticks - these are always fun to create, you normally don't need many,- 1-2 per characters is fine. I have one that always rubs a scar on his neck - another than always uses the same gun to kill, another that always second guesses himself ect ect - but these are always fun (i feel) to add into a story... and they can often relate to other things... have a detective who always flicks a pen when he knows/figures out something (even if the story doesn't say what) that way a reader can get excited knowing "he's got it!" even if they don't know what "it" is :p

Wow, sorry for my awfully long tangent of a critique. it may be more of my personal experience with various points of your guide and maybe some critique on a few parts... but yeah - when it comes to writing, and especially characters I do tend to go a little haywire - I have after all been doing it for about 7 years now (writing) and basically had to learn the hard way.. trial and error.

Anyways that's my 2 cents on your guide, overall I think this is a wonderful guide for people wanting to create an OC or develop one further. I love how you concentrate on appearances almost last and I even learned a few things :) I sure hope to see some wonderfully created OC's after this guide XD

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Butterscotsh Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

Just kidding, i didn't read all of it at once. But from what i have read i can tell it's a fantastic guide!
DeviantFredda Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I personally think that the first section(choosing the role of the character) shouldn't be done first. Of course it's helpful when you describe a character to others. But it can be very interesting to let a character evolve without having all the protagonist/antagonist expectations in your head and THEN give them the role they fit in. (Just my opinion.)
EastZombie Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013
This is well written, extremely thorough, and so far the best guide on creating a character I've read on DA. I hate to nitpick but, in the "dialects/linguistics" section, the last sentence is contradictory. Otherwise I cannot think of anything wrong with this guide.
amejia16 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, I just have to say thank you for writing this out. I've been thinking about writing a story with an oc before, but I couldn't really get far with the character, but after reading this and actually thinking about all this inner character stuff, the creative juices really started flowing. My oc has been comeing together very nicely and is almost complete just after a couple previous oc's would take me weeks to try to figure out and I would always end up bailing on them, but after getting her backstory and personality and purpose (etc.) she is almost complete, and to that I thank you deeply, I don't think that I could have been able to do this without your guide,I might have just given up trying to write all together if it weren't for this, so thank you for this. This guide really helped. :cuddle:
clautchy Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Student Writer
i'm really glad that you didn't give up with your characters! it's great that you've gotten much inspiration from this. sometimes it's just someone else talking about a topic for you to get motivated ;P good luck with your characters and your story!! x
amejia16 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
AHH!!! I'M SOSORRY I DIDN'T REPLY SOONER! :( I had actually gotten my OC done the next day and I'm almost done with the first chapter, but I couldn't tell you that because I got grounded the day after messaging you for something I didn't even do :( and I just got my tablet back late last night so I couldn't even tell you… forgive me? *gives you puppy dog eyes*
clautchy Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Student Writer
That's fine! Parents are a bitch, nothing we can do to avoid that. 

Congratulations on the progress of your story, though (: 
amejia16 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :D i'm still trying to get it fixed but most of it's comeing out great B-)
88Aurora88 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013
This tutorial has been so helpful! I never realized how much went into making a character. I'm currently in the process of developing some characters of mine and this will help me out a lot :). Thanks so much for making this :D.
Yurei-Hanatsuki Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is pretty cool. I'm no strange to the creation of OCs, but I found this to be informative and very insightful. Now if only I could find the balls to write a sex scene for one of them. xD
clautchy Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Student Writer
glad you found it useful ^^
agilesalmon Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013
im trying to wright a story but wanted to begin with what i wanted my characters to be like and had no idea where to start...this will help me out a lot, thank you
clautchy Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Student Writer
i'm glad i could help you out get started (:
PuffyMarshmellows160 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Student General Artist
Wow that took a lot of reading :P
thanks for this it helped alot and just in time too for my story im writing^^
thanks again :icondummydanceplz:
clautchy Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Student Writer
I'm glad you found this helpful. You're welcome!
Staria689 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013
Wow, this is awesome! This really helps me out with fleshing out my Oc's more (I've got three out of four left to do!) even if its for Transformers. Keep up the good work!
clautchy Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Student Writer
glad you like it! <3
KaytlinTheAwesome Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013   Traditional Artist
Thank you so much! This is making my science class doodle into an amazing oc. Very helpful :D
clautchy Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Student Writer
i'm glad you liked it c:
Pop-Tart-Zombie Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012
This is incredible. I also love how you didn't explode into a Mary Sue rant and talked about research.
clautchy Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Student Writer
Well, there's really no point, is there? If I were to rant about that, I wouldn't be very constructive.
Pop-Tart-Zombie Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
True. But a lot of people tend to do that in their tutorials. It's nice to find one that doesn't. C:
sowhat730 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
i agree with you... i like a developed character and one that isn't mary/john-ish too! ohh speaking about characters... know where to RP supernatural? lol i have been looking everywhere...
clautchy Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Student Writer
Well, Tumblr is the place to be to RP. Make yourself an RP account or just ask to RP in the tracked tags.
sowhat730 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012
ahh thank you!!! i will definitely look into that...
Luxurieux Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Every OC writer should read this. I swear to Merlin, I'm so tired of bad OCs. I don't even publish my stories on the internet, mostly because I'm not sure about the depth of my character and if I've done everything to make people want to continue reading it. And yet, some people just slap something down, say "done," and think they've developed a masterpiece just like that. I mean, I guess we all have to start somewhere, but good grief. D:
clautchy Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Student Writer
I'm glad you think this is helpful ^-^
I suppose the fact is that a character is never 'done' as with a character, it is ever-evolving, and with a good story, comes flexibility and proper development.
Luxurieux Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Right. There's also a lot of trial and error when it comes to developing a character, too, I guess. It comes with experience, but it's also something you have to make an effort to understand as well.
clautchy Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Student Writer
Yes, definitely.
AwesomenessOf666 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012
This is going to be very helpful for me. Thank you so much! :)
clautchy Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Student Writer
No problem ^-^
unicornomics Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012   General Artist
A note on alcholics family history and enivirment factor in
clautchy Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Student Writer
I guess. It's kind of implied.
unicornomics Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012   General Artist
Ok,thanks for responding
The-Hollster Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Student General Artist
This is great! Although I do Transformers, part of this will help me very much, thank you:)
clautchy Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Student Writer
You're welcome ^-^ Glad I helped.
heartdiver123 Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
WhatisthisIdon'teven-- I LOVE YOU!

This... Is... just... GOD! Yes. I love you. I love you for writing this. Me gusta mucho. Thank YOUUUU~
clautchy Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Student Writer
:blush: No problem, dearie. Glad you find this useful ^-^
heartdiver123 Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is SOOOO useful. Just... thank you. :glomp:
WonHitWonder Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
YES. I adore these types of lists when it comes to creating a character, and I was with you every step of the way. I was thinking of a few fanfics I have read that have awful characters that are either cliches or Mary Sues or generic supernatural crap. I'm a demon and that makes me edgy and dark and cool without further character development! Phew... Anyways, EXCELLENT list and thanks for posting it.

PS: I highly reccommend that writers visit TV Tropes, it's really helped me be aware of some of the tropes that I was using (some good, some bad) and it helped my writing out a lot!
clautchy Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Student Writer
Ah thank you. And yes, there are many fanfics that usually contain one or two of these features, but an original fic is usually much more in-depth. But that is without saying, I suppose. Of course, there are many well-written fanfics, they are just harder to find.

Oh yes, TV tropes is a great site. Avoiding using tropes at all these days is near impossible but yes the site does make readers aware of some of the biggies.
WonHitWonder Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, I usually enjoy the original fics more. Most fanfics try to twist the original story in a way that wasn't the original intention, but not in a good way, only to fulfill the fantasy of the fanfic writer. Are there good, complex, insightful ones? Oh yes, but they're usually buried under several layers of other awful fics and can be really hard to find...

Went off on a tangent there! Again, thanks for the list, I had a great time reading it!
clautchy Featured By Owner May 14, 2012  Student Writer
Yes, and I believe most of them are called AUs. But then again, fanfiction really is made up from a good deal of headcanons.

You're welcome ^-^
BHDH Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012
You get around all the aspects I could think of, and more. From the obvious basics to the tiny little things that we don't normally think of. Great guide!
I was reading through this and finding that my characters actually have most of what I want them to be.. Still, quite inspiring, makes me want to detail them out a bit more :)

As a side note here, maybe it's worth saying that you should compare the character to yourself. I've found that if I don't watch out, my characters become pseudo-versions of myself. It's important to distance them from yourself and your own opinion on things if you wan't them to be true individuals..

My characters are in a comic btw. In every media with a plot, this is useful.
clautchy Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Student Writer
Well thank you! Sometimes I worry myself that I forget things and even now I'm aware that there's still so much to put in, but really it's up to the creator to figure the most intricate details for themselves otherwise they will never learn or develop.

Hmm, well I have done that consciously as I am quite aware of my personality, but I've only ever compared myself to one character who I actually want to have some of my characteristics because I feel they suit the character, not because I just want to be in my own story somewhere. So I suppose I use my own personality and attributes as a tool.

Ah, I see.
Eva-Dragon-Goddess Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is really helpful!! You've listed so many things about the character that I've never thought of .... I bet you have epic, realistic and 3D characters C:
By the way, is it just me or do you link your character stuffs? It makes it easier to relate to and seem 3 dimensional, like
Parents died in car crash -> Phobia of cars -> doesn't like crossing roads
as a crappy example of what I'm getting at ...

PS. How do you get huge writing? O:
clautchy Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you!
Well, I would like to think I have amazing, realistic and 3D characters, however I cannot make that judgement myself so I will just nod once in agreement.
Well, within reason. Of course, linking traits with incidents/experiences is certainly a good thing, it is not wise to do it with excess, and also, if using your said example, it could be considered cliché or a bit over the top. Say, as an exaggeration, it would be 'oh my parents died in a car crash when I was like three years old and I'm like totally terrified of cars and everything because I'm an unhappy person with a twisted and dark childhood baaaawww'.
People internalise sad accidents and may feel upset when seeing the actual place where said incident happened, however most of the time they will be fine among traffic, possibly a little flinchy around dodgy drivers.

Huge writing? How do you mean?
Eva-Dragon-Goddess Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Welcome lol C:
Oh, I meant that as like, a quickly thought-up example, so it's not good anyway xD
But yeah it's so annoying when people exagggerate things like that lol.
With the linking thing it was supposed to mean like, minor things/habits and stuff. For example, my main character like, sleeps in trees. One day his friends decided to climb onto a higher branch and pour cold water on his head, and he fell off -> so from then on he sleeps in the highest branch possible. But not like, paranoia ya know, just habit.

lol, for some reason you could make your writing look huge? On your deviation thing, the 'char•ac•ter' is really big.
Like, this is small writing so how do you get big writing o.O
clautchy Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Student Writer
Okay, yeah, if that's what you mean. Then sure. I mean there's really endless possibilities to why people do things a certain way whether it be out of habit or paranoia.

Oooh~ I just used some easy HTML code.
Eva-Dragon-Goddess Featured By Owner May 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol true, that. It makes a character real C:

But but but what HTML code?! D: tellll meeeeee :faint:
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